This is my writing task for this week. We had a model we had to follow. I chose to write about Hot Water Beach! I used verbs, nouns, and adverbs. I enjoyed writing this!
I have always wanted to visit Hot Water Beach - your writing makes me want to go there! Your writing brought back memories of my holidays in Paihia - my sisters and I used to do exactly what you have described. Fun times!
Kia Ora Mrs Naden, Thank you for the comment! Hot Water Beach is amazing, you should definitely go there sometime. I'm glad that I have reminded you of a holiday. It sounds like you had a great time in Paihia with your sisters. It makes me want to go to Paihia myself! Have a great day, Tara
I have always wanted to visit Hot Water Beach - your writing makes me want to go there! Your writing brought back memories of my holidays in Paihia - my sisters and I used to do exactly what you have described. Fun times!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Mrs Naden,
DeleteThank you for the comment! Hot Water Beach is amazing, you should definitely go there sometime. I'm glad that I have reminded you of a holiday. It sounds like you had a great time in Paihia with your sisters. It makes me want to go to Paihia myself!
Have a great day,
Tara